First Submission

by Tim Cassidy-Curtis


"Wacher doin'?" she asked.

"Writing a 55 word story." I said. "Wanna see?"

She read my submission about a 55 word story. "Cliché" She said.

Showed her another. "Title's too long." She criticized. "Seven words, remember?"

One last try. She read it and glowered.

Didn't even duck. She decked me. Yay. I had my story.