by Ari Collins
I treated my next girlfriend as well as you'd treated me. I took her on vacations, bought surprise gifts, cuddled for whole weekends, and shared secrets I'd never told anyone. When we had built a loving, trusting relationship, I slept with her little sister. I learned so much from you. It almost felt like revenge.
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
Venge
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2 comments:
Ah, this came together well. It flows better than the previous versions and tells the tale well. Nicely done.
Really enjoyed this snapshot of payback! Mountains of story in such a small piece. Well done!!
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