Tuesday, September 8, 2009


by Ari Collins

I treated my next girlfriend as well as you'd treated me. I took her on vacations, bought surprise gifts, cuddled for whole weekends, and shared secrets I'd never told anyone. When we had built a loving, trusting relationship, I slept with her little sister. I learned so much from you. It almost felt like revenge.


Allie said...

Ah, this came together well. It flows better than the previous versions and tells the tale well. Nicely done.

Crybbe666 said...

Really enjoyed this snapshot of payback! Mountains of story in such a small piece. Well done!!