by Angel Zapata
“Can I buy you a drink?”
“Your place or mine?”
“Fuck me.”
“Love you.”
“See you at the courthouse.”
“I do.”
“A son!”
“I’m so happy.”
“I want a divorce!”
“You’re not happy?”
“Our son?”
“I can’t.”
“See you in court.”
“Hate you!”
“Fuck you!”
“Your place is mine!”
“Can someone buy me a drink?”
Sunday, October 11, 2009
Love Story
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13 comments:
Pretty much sums it up! Smart work.
Love it. A concise life story. Peace, Linda
Ah, the circle of life. Great story, Angel!
That certainly sums it up!
oops, lost that last one again.
Life accelerated!...just another reason to slow down.
Very nice use of dialogue.
Man. That's the most depressing chiasmus I've ever seen.
Clever! Loved the symmetry of this Angel, then got a buzz out of reading it in reverse.
Now I'm going to go drink myself into oblivion! HAHAHA, Nice one, Angel.
You've just written an entire novel in like 55 words. Drink your beer and go write another.
Nice write, buddy.
This one's right up my alley. Formalism within the already formalist structure of a 55-word-story? Yes please!
Brilliant, that.
Very nice. Perfect circle of life, however sad that might be sometimes.
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