Sunday, November 1, 2009

Style Parody: Ari Collins

by Robert Gryfft

"Do you want..." he began.
"...a massage? Yes." She laughed. She was beautiful. This siren, this vision was his and his alone. A sense of all-encompassing warmth filled him.
"God," he said. "You can..."
"...finish your sentences," she finished. "It's fantastic."
He nodded. "Except for when it's terrible."
She nodded too. She was beautiful.


Sebatinsky said...

Hahahahahahaha! Right on!

Jackson said...

This is why I love you, Gryfft. This is why I love you and Ari.

Sebatinsky said...

So, I've decided that this is too frantic for Ari. Also, the last line doesn't have the typical Ari twisty oomph. We'll need followups.