Saturday, January 12, 2008

The Fall

by White-noise

Already the rebels had conquered much of the city. The Lord of Light sat in throne, awaiting the usurpers coming. The rebel leader walked calmly into the chamber, smiling as his minions brought death to those final loyal guards, and spoke, "Your time is come, Lucifer. I am that is and all shall worship me."

1 comment:

Rob said...

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Constructive criticism: your punctuation is sometimes a little bit off. And I'm a big fan of hard returns, but that's just me personally.

Let me reiterate, your content and word choices are absolutely fantastic. They resonate with me.