Sunday, April 11, 2010

h/c

By Robert Gryfft

He couldn't find the right balance of blankets all night. He spent too long in the shower adjusting the hot water, and jerked off even though he was late.
He didn't talk to her all day. He made a couple false starts, and she looked at him strangely. Finally he just said, "I love you."

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh, real life. All the little details no one thinks they want to hear. Until they get written so artfully and then yeah, they work.

-Zel

Anonymous said...

Stop spying on me to get ideas for nanofiction, Robert.

Allie said...

ah, the awkward dance of love.